THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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By Mehul Desai
When a critical malfunction during a colonization mission turns all passengers feral, a survivor attempts to recreate his lost lover through her descendants and twenty-year stasis cycles.
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I really like the poster, Mehul Desai. And unique concept. My only suggestion for the logline is put "Cast Away meets Passengers and The New World" in the synopsis instead of the logline.
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Thanks Maurice, updated
You're welcome, Mehul Desai.
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Hate to bring up reality and honesty into this forum, Mehul, but this is NOT a logLINE, it is a short (or bullet) synopsis. A logLINE is a LINE (2 LINES are forgivable but one is preferred), just as you did with ANDIES. "In the final stages of a colonization mission to a New Earth, a malfunction prematurely awakens every passenger, causing them to revert to a primitive feral state" is a great logLINE. That is strong enough to grab most any producer, manager or agent. Good luck!
Noted Bob, updated
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