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Ryleigh, the daughter of a sorority legacy, starts college and decides to be a pledge in a sorority when everything starts falling apart.
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It needs a little more to flesh out the concept. It sounds interesting, though. I just want to know more. I've had the same problem with some of my log lines. Too spare, Good Idea however.