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DREAMS OF STARLIGHT

DREAMS OF STARLIGHT
By Dan Hertzog

GENRE: Romance, Drama
LOGLINE:

A young Mongolian herdswoman flees her abusive relationship to pursue her passion for performing -- only to see her longtime Hollywood dreams realized by her daughter.

SYNOPSIS:

DREAMS OF STARLIGHT follows the life of Saran, a young herdswoman who flees her abusive relationship to pursue her passion for performing during the fall of Communism in 1990s Mongolia. Through the aid of her longtime best friend, she finds her way to Guam where she works to send money to the mother and daughter she left behind. After years of supporting herself and her family, she marries a United States Air Force pilot and sends for her daughter, Marlaa, to live with them in Guam. When a teenage Marlaa uncovers her stepfather’s secrets, she ushers Saran to Los Angeles where the two can live together in peace. That is, until Saran falls victim to liver disease and her dreams of performing dissipate as her fight for survival takes hold.

Ganbat S Hertzog

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Rutger Oosterhoff

...she should be glad for her daughter. ... Her daughter has the life she wanted and now she is jealous or behaves like the opposite -- she overcompensates with good intentions but it's working out bad. So at first glance, I don't see a big enough external problem in whatever way. There could be, the logline just does not show it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8s45pNvEBIc

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