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By Alana de Freitas
While committing a crime, three ex-cons witness another crime that goes beyond even their moral compass. Knowing they cannot notify the authorities without incriminating themselves, they decide to take matters into their own hands to recitfy the situation.
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This is another really good one. My only note would be to tell us what the crimes are. So if this is three bank robbers witnessing a murder we know more. "While robbing a bank, three ex-cons witness a horrifying murder. Knowing they..." and then you can drop "to rectify the situation."
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