GENRE: Thriller
LOGLINE:
Kill Joy.
logline.
"To err is human; to forgive is divine."
Alex Denni is a man who has spent his whole life betraying the women who loved him. His latest conquest, Joy Parsons, a young, dark, brooding girl with a passion for bats and witchcraft, is no different. At least that's what he thinks.
When Alex breaks her heart the last thing he expects is that Joy will break his... literally. In only five days he must find the women who once loved him, and seek their forgiveness, or suffer his imminent fate at Joy's hands.
haha I hear ya there. I too am usually never satisfied with the first draft. Write it fast to get all the info out of my head then I will go back over and add much more to it. Its always a fun game to play though! :)
Long for a logline but a really cool concept. Reminds me in a small way of "Good Luck Chuck" with Dane Cook, without the death. I'd break it down a bit Guy. A serial player with no regard for the women he sleeps with, unknowingly hooks up with a witch, breaks her heart and suffers a curse that' left him five days to seek forgiveness from every women who's heart he broke. Problem is he can't remember them all.
Now that sounds very interesting!
Thanks. I'm starting another rewrite soon, as I'm not happy with some of it still.
haha I hear ya there. I too am usually never satisfied with the first draft. Write it fast to get all the info out of my head then I will go back over and add much more to it. Its always a fun game to play though! :)
Long for a logline but a really cool concept. Reminds me in a small way of "Good Luck Chuck" with Dane Cook, without the death. I'd break it down a bit Guy. A serial player with no regard for the women he sleeps with, unknowingly hooks up with a witch, breaks her heart and suffers a curse that' left him five days to seek forgiveness from every women who's heart he broke. Problem is he can't remember them all.
Thanks for the input Norman. When I get back to this one I have a lot of things to look over actually.