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After a boy finds a key that opens a door into an animation world, he leaves the door open for their enemy to escape into his. Now he must stop them before they find the key to rule both worlds.
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After a boy and his sister visit their grandmother’s cottage in the forest, he finds a key hidden in a tree. It’s wrapped in old cloth with a riddle/map written on it. The boy uses the map to find a large tree deep in the forest and uses the key to open a door inside it. He enters a dark tunnel that leads to a cartoon world, where he meets a little girl who cries all the time, a boy who laughs all the time, another girl who lies all the time, and another boy who is clumsy. They take the boy to meet their family, the father who can extend his body, the mother who can go wafer thin, and the uncle who can grow tall and shrink. They tell the boy that the key was given to a human many years ago to be destroyed so THE WICKED ONES, the cartoon families enemy, doesn't find it. But, after finding out that the boy never locked the door, the family panic. They take him back and tell him to lock the door on the other side but unknown to them, the Wicked ones have already gone through. They consist of a large character with a toad face and scary teeth, a tall, four armed character that speaks backwards, a small character with two eyes at the front and one at the back, and a child, with a sweet face at the front but who can rotate its head to reveal an evil face. They take the grandmother hostage, leaving the boy and girl to escape back to the cartoon world to ask the family for help.
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Lee
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Hi, everyone, thanks for rating the logline for my children's story. Still hoping to find a home for it to be turned into a movie. Any suggestions would be appreciated.
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