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DAY CARE (SHORT) - UNDER OPTION

DAY CARE (SHORT) - UNDER OPTION
By Brandi Self

GENRE: Fantasy, Drama
LOGLINE:

A cantankerous toddler learns about love, death, and loss when he visits daycare for the first time.

SYNOPSIS:

Confusion ensues when two-year-old Teddy is dropped off at daycare and meets a group of babies that is made up of an angry cowboy, a quiet German, a tough redhead, and a spontaneous glamour girl named Olive who can’t seem to get her lipstick straight. But, when he and Olive sequester themselves in an empty room with a puzzling painting that shows an old, lonely couple and Olive collapses, Teddy slowly begins to realize that his life isn’t as linear as he once thought.

DAY CARE (SHORT) - UNDER OPTION

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Mike Gold

This is terrific. Nicely written log line, says volumes and I love the concept. But ... is this a comedy-drama kind of thing? Could work any way you spin it.

Brandi Self

You hit it on the nose! Added the synopsis too.

Brandi Self

Hi Ryan, DM me your email and I will send it right over!

Valerie Michele Oliver

This sounds GREAT!

Brandi Self

Thanks Valerie!

Marcelo Grion

this one i like the most

Mitch Klebanoff

This sounds clever.

Brandi Self

Hey Marcelo and Mitch, I appreciate you both commenting. It has a comedic element that people seem to be drawn to. It is definitely one of my favorites. Thanks for checking it out!

Mike Chinea

Sounds cute and interesting.

Iris Ebia

cute!

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Jinendra Sashan

Awesome!

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