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PYRRHIC - LOGLINE AND FIRST 10 PAGES
By Kevin Ryan

GENRE: Action, Drama
LOGLINE: A teenage girl is forcibly escorted by her wounded protector across a post-alien invasion apocolypse to safety, their route entwining with a determined soldiers continued fight against the remaining alien force.

PYRRHIC - LOGLINE AND FIRST 10 PAGES

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Shawn Speake

After the apocalypse, a (specific) soldier must escort two children through an alien invasion to a safe zone, before, (the stakes). Looks like it's coming along, Kevin!

Chris Herden

Hi Kevin.... what are your soldier's (protagonist's) needs and/or wants and the challenges he must meet? Why does he need to save the children? Self-worth? Your logline, as is, is introductory, but I see the makings of a great concept...

Kevin Ryan

See I'm wondering if I'd end up making the logline way too long but maybe what I should be doing then is taking this base logline and include all these things suggested and then if it's too long it's easier to cut and trim here and there

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