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THE MARIES (AS MARIAS)

THE MARIES (AS MARIAS)
By C. S. César

GENRE: Independent, Sci-fi
LOGLINE:

Portugal, 90’s. After a mysterious explosion in a small town, where nothing ever happens, four teenage girls question life while unravelling a series of paranormal events, which results in the disappearance of one of them.  
PS: The photography on the poster is not mine. 

SYNOPSIS:

A group of four friends, all with the names “Maria” something, believers of the most weird esoteric experiences, see their world turned inside out when one of them mysteriously disappears after the death of a woman in the recent explosion of a building in the neighborhood where they live - a very small village where nothing ever happens and everyone knows each other. Involved in paranormal phenomena and rumors of possible suicide, and organized crime that does not play in their favor, the three Marias unite to find her friend who also completely vanished from social media, while trying to decode the "Dreamlinked" PC game, of which she was obsessed, and where nothing is as it seems ...

THE MARIES (AS MARIAS)

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Nathaniel Baker

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C. S. César

Thank you, Nathaniel! Your rate means the world to me.

Max Bogan

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C. S. César

Thank you Max Bogan :D :D this means a lot!

Barry John Terblanche

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Barry John Terblanche

Well thought out story. Put together nicely (plot)

C. S. César

Barry John Terblanche Thank you so much Barry! Your feedback is regarding the synopsis in the description right? This one won a screenplay contest last year, I am working on the next episodes.

Kacee Diehl DeMasi

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Kacee Diehl DeMasi

Loglines are a max of 25 words. "After a mysterious explosion, four teenage girls question life while unraveling a series of paranormal events, which results in the disappearance of one of them." Good Luck

Dustin Quinteros

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C. S. César

Kacee Diehl DeMasi you helped a lot! That logline is fantastic! Thank you so much! I did write too much in there.

C. S. César

Dustin Quinteros would appreciate some feedback if you're able to.

Dustin Quinteros

Kacee DeMasi comment is pretty much the same thing I would have said. I don't agree 100% with the 25 words, but it is a good practice, I might even stop at paranormal events. Here's a helpful link:

https://youtu.be/mtNg9a19Luo

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