its good plot when the comes in he can barely speak english when he speaks you should put in more on the english/spanish like for instance as he replies little more input because he can speak english in the area that he works and input some lines in there on ridiculous side , where the actor speaks back and says what did you say but when you speak slow down a little this is not mexico/spain i swear torress you can shure turn a perfectly good conversation into a world of what did you say or (your input) to bring the audience will be relaxed kinda laughing then spring a breath taking line then throw in some short talk where the person getting shot at shows him stumbling down onto a spot where there is bones or some kinda of spine tingling drama like oh God what is happening throwing back into his past remembering certain areas that stick out in his sub concious times of his childhood remembering his father or friend etc teaching him by living examples you can email me at theoneset1@yahoo.com for film/video/productions have a good day shaun sure thing on the 2nd part of your statement about working give me a line rob