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By Cheryl Laughlin

GENRE: Thriller, Independent

A misogynist, gives-no-shits car salesman finds himself in over his head when he pockets a store lighter at a stop in the remote town of Chugwater.


An on-the-road salesman who tells it like he sees it finds his life unwinding as he pulls into the small town of Chugwater. While refueling on energy drinks at a local soda fountian, he pockets a small lighter, completely disregarding the sign warning of no tolerance for shoplifters. He does, however, notice the photos of missing persons on the shop's corkboard, ripping a couple with hot woman to ogle later. But later... well, later is not going to go so well, as he quickly discovers the underbelly of this super polite, Keep Chugwater Clean town.

- Official Selection, Scriptwriters & Co UK Table Read

Cheryl Laughlin

Bit of upcoming fun with this script with a UK table read with Scriptwriters & Co on April 19, 2021. Can always sign up here to listen in:

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