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By Robert Rosenbaum

GENRE: Comedy

A socially awkward physics professor who may or may not have won a mega-lotto jackpot goes on a celebratory weekend trip to Las Vegas; but before the state of the ticket is resolved, the ticket is stolen, his new girlfriend is kidnapped and his cat goes missing. Is four-hundred-eighty-five million dollars really worth the hassle?

Nancy Newbauer

Sounds like it will be really funny, Robert. For some reason I've always leaned toward writing in the comedy genre - would love to read the script when you've finished.

Jorge J Prieto

Robert, I like the stakes and the cat missing, what is that all about? Appreciate hearing from you in my logline, thanks for the suggestions .

Robert Rosenbaum

Thanks Nancy and Jorge. This is my "November" project and I am continuing with it. I am always happy to show my work and get opinions from other writers I respect. I will put more up here as I finished. I am also always excited to read the work of my friends.

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