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THE CLIENT
By John D Clay
the return of Sophie zucker
SYNOPSIS:
(Opening) INT office corridor - day Sophie struts down the long shaped space in secretary clothes. She opens her blouse and strips she turns and enters office (named Sophie Zucker Secretary) Mourns are heard behind the door. INT SOPHIE’S APARTMENT – EVENING Sophie is relaxing in a warmly lit bedroom. Sophie straps on a pair of knickers. SOPHIE Loaded, on target and shit... She rides another set of balls. SOPHIE (V.O) OH, Derek, deep derek god his were the best. Like a lollystick in a slot. My buns enjoyed thT RIGHT UP TO THE LAST BOURNE. Dizzy with sex she pushes her bum back harder... SOPHIE Oh, holy ___ that’s good. Come on you slut. You’re ___ my brain my balls are the smart part/ Feeling pressure she downs a bottle of champagne SOPHIE JESUS ... my best ass worksout. She exits the office her knicker hang on the door knob. (end) INT. HOTEL ROOM - DAY SOPHIE ZUCKER, MID 30S BLONDE, HIGH CLASS HOOKER LAYS ON THE BED IN LINGERIE, ENGAGED.
JIM,
She is reflected in wardrobe mirror elaborately detail lingerie. She turns back to the bed. SOPHIE How do like these knobs Jim? she lights up The content is v worth your while.
--- The Client 15 Act I Sophie has fling with Boyfriend (David), he hasn’t seen her for 10 yrs. He doesn’t know how her life has developed since. So conflict is central to this part of the narrative He has gone into business (TBC) life is more secure but it turns out she is his latest client and it’s a challenge to resolve the contract with her. Act II Evening out: Act II David and Sophie (4 pages) 3 + 3 (6 pages_) Dialogue part? Confrontation David threaten to leave sophie for the 2nd time. More of of David side (Backstory?) Act III Sophie has to resolves things? How? Happy ending? /... INT. HOTEL ROOM – EVENING DAVID AND Sophie sit on the bed warmly lit by interior light. DAVID Did you enjoy that, Sophie It was different David Now for desert? Sophie I thought you might. Boardroom - Day David All those years ago to me all you were no more than a set of legs and an ass that wanted attention SOPHIE At least my ass is still here you’re won’t David You know the answer to that.
SOPHIE 2You can put your agenda right up to your ass.
David I’d rather go for your doorknobs than that.
THE CLIENT
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