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TJ White
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COMPNAY MAN
By TJ White

GENRE: Comedy

LOGLINE: Company Hires an efficiency worker to get there company to run with a profit. This Slacker Tracker has more than she bargained for.

James Patrick Brown

My day job is senior technical editor and I can't stop myself from suggesting that you change "Hires" to "hires" and "there" to "their" .