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THE MUSIC THRAPY

THE MUSIC THRAPY
By Faustine Cherotich

GENRE: Music, Romance, Comedy, Drama
LOGLINE: Eli Barnes, 18, has to grow up quickly when his mother goes into coma. He uses music as a form of therapy and eventually as a source of livelihood. He meets Amina Curtis , his world is illuminated and he starts becoming happy and enjoying life step by step.
Nimrod Fadhili

since you're from Kenya, can we collabo?

Angela Cristantello

Hi, Faustine! This sounds lovely :)

When you write a logline, think of it less as a synopsis, so to speak, but a pair of concise and engaging sentences that touches upon the following four things:

-your protagonist (the essence of who they are, because that tells us far more about them than their name: "eight year-old troublemaker", "the monstrous spirit of a slain janitor", etc)

-the inciting incident (which you have here with Eli's mother going into a coma)

-the obstacle (what your protagonist wants+what's standing in their way of getting what they want)

-the stakes (the "or else")

I just sent you a DM that can help :)

Good start!

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