since you're from Kenya, can we collabo?

Hi, Faustine! This sounds lovely :)

When you write a logline, think of it less as a synopsis, so to speak, but a pair of concise and engaging sentences that touches upon the following four things:

-your protagonist (the essence of who they are, because that tells us far more about them than their name: "eight year-old troublemaker", "the monstrous spirit of a slain janitor", etc)

-the inciting incident (which you have here with Eli's mother going into a coma)

-the obstacle (what your protagonist wants+what's standing in their way of getting what they want)

-the stakes (the "or else")

I just sent you a DM that can help :)

Good start!