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THE DISCO DUCK
By Nate Rymer
A gifted dance music-loving duck DJ is magically transported back in time to the house scene of 1995, where he seizes the chance to meet the parents he never knew: the King & Queen of Disco House. BACK TO THE FUTURE meets COCO meets ZOOTOPIA.
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Is this by any chance the origin of the dance called "The Disco Duck?" Hahaha! Cheers, mate!
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This concept is so adorable and quirky, I can't. So much fun, Nate! I would potentially think about streamlining it just a hair ( "musically-gifted dance music-loving duck" feels like too much of a mouthful), but! That being said, man oh man, this is CUTE.
Haha, thank you Angela, quirky is right with this one! I've always loved EDM and anthropomorphism, so why not throw the two together and see what happens?! I'll amend the logline to reduce that mouthful :D
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Thank you Rebecca, glad you like the idea! A few mixes of genre happening this one I'll admit (animation, musical, sci-fi-, fantasy, comedy), so I'll review and see how I handle the obstacle going forward :)
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Hahah cute! Reminds me of that cartoon about 2 ducks trying to become musicians. God, what's the name. It was soo long ago! :) But anything disco sounds like a fun animation! :)
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Actually, Bianca, "Disco Duck" was a huge dance craze back in the 70s!! You might find it on youtube LOL!! People actually swung their feet from side to side to the dance beat! it's hilarious!!
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DD Myles No way!! :D Hahaha! I am totally going to do the duck dance next time I go to a party (if ever :P )
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Haha, happy to hear you both like the concept Bianca and DD, and enjoy the music too! :D
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Hi Nate! You have a Pixar-type hit for sure! I thought I try my hand at the logline. Here goes...
Logine:
After a dance-gifted, but lonely Disc Jockey Duck longs for the parents he never knew, a magical spell transports him back to 1995, where he discovers he's the only one who can restore his parents back to their rightful place as the King and Queen of Disco House.
Hi DD, nice shot at it! I’ll have a good re-review of mine soon
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Hi Nate. Here's another go at the logline. Disco Duck: A dance-whiz, lonely Duck magically transports himself back to 1995 to discover his true parents and fight for his rightful lineage as the prince of Disco House.
Nice one DD, I'll keep refining! :)
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Thank you Arthur! :)
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Thank you John! :)