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TOBY
By Hakim Kisakye

GENRE: Thriller, Action
LOGLINE:

A furious top secret government security agency assassin survives ultimate death, loses his memory to baby life and fall into the hands of his bosses.

TOBY

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Nate Rymer

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Marcos Fizzotti

Hello Hakim. That's a very good concept, it'll make a great movie. Just a suggestion for the logline: "After a furious top secret government security agency assassin survives ultimate death, he loses his memory to baby life and fall in the hands of his bosses."

Wayne Cothron

This story sounds like a cool story

Good luck with it

Wayne Cothron

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Tasha Lewis

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Hakim Kisakye

Thanks Tasha, thanks Nate, thanks Wayne and thank Marcos, I like the suggestion and actually it brings it out, thanks a lot all of you, am done with its first draft.

Wayne Cothron

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Hakim Kisakye

Thanks Wayne

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