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THE QUEEN OF BASEBALL
By A.J. & D.L. Gideon

GENRE: Historical, Drama
LOGLINE:

The true story of Lizzie Murphy who struggles to become the first woman to play semi-professional baseball before the Commissioner bans women from the game.

Maria Johnsen

Make it concise and shorter. Use 3 acts structure which you do in screenplay in your logline too.

Nick Assunto - Stage32 Script Services

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Nick Assunto - Stage32 Script Services

This is a tight logline, and works with the biopic formula. You can restructure it to read more like a standard logline, but as biopics go this seems to fit the mold nicely.

Nathaniel Baker

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