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The true story of Lizzie Murphy who struggles to become the first woman to play semi-professional baseball before the Commissioner bans women from the game.
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Make it concise and shorter. Use 3 acts structure which you do in screenplay in your logline too.
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This is a tight logline, and works with the biopic formula. You can restructure it to read more like a standard logline, but as biopics go this seems to fit the mold nicely.