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ANGELINA
By Fides Ramos Gheysary

GENRE: Sci-fi, Drama
LOGLINE:

A young female astronaut's first dream, success, love and loss in her adolescence which affect her scientific view and religious belief.

Stefan Barjaktarevic

Hi Fides, I like movies that are philosophically and intellectually challenging. Especially the aspect of religion and science would make me watch this movie. So I am totally your target audience here, BUT i am not really hooked by the logline when it comes to story. It is too vague to relate. If you could change a little bit, of course without giving too much away, like the core conflict, I would be much more interested. Because right now, it sounds like most other "Religion vs Science"-movies. Would appreciate that and can't wait to read/see the finished Project :) all the best! - Stefan

Stefan Barjaktarevic

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