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MY EMERALD BRACELET

MY EMERALD BRACELET
By Charles K. Frazier

GENRE: Mystery, Drama
LOGLINE:

A teenager is framed for murder and tried as an adult by a corrupt District Attorney who wants to use her to promote his for profit prison.

SYNOPSIS:

EMERALD GREEN, is a 17 year old girl who takes a day off from school to celebrate her 17th birthday at the local mall, alone. But a 35 year old woman, SUSAN GAGE, is physically attracted to Emerald. She sees Emerald looking at a beautiful, very expensive emerald bracelet and Susan gives it to her and offers to take her for a birthday brunch.

After brunch, Susan showers Emerald with more gifts while plying her with champagne. She takes Emerald to her house where she passes out. When she wakes up, she is down to her undies, with a lock on her leg, a small pistol in her right hand and Susan is on the floor, dead. Emerald panics, calls 911, tells them the situation and waits for someone to come and rescue her. Instead, she gets arrested and charged as an adult with 1st degree murder of one Susan Gage.

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MY EMERALD BRACELET

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Noah Parker

Rated this logline

Noah Parker

Great logline. It really sets the story up well and it doesn't have any unnecessary elements.

Charles K. Frazier

Thanks for the great feedback, Noah!

Charles K. Frazier

Thanks for the huge rating, Brandon!

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