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When interplanetary bounty hunter Kane get trapped in a floating prison called Kryse, he must figure out a way to stop Frost, a ruthless legendary convict, from creating chaos in the universe.
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When interplanetary criminal Kane must serve a sentence in a floating prison called Kryse, he must figure out a way to stop Frost from creating chaos in the universe.
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