Hi, Kyle. Sounds like a fun mix of two very different characters! Lots of possibilities for humor. ;) But, as written in the logline, it seems rather an unlikely meeting/scenario between these two. He's a recluse, a hermit. So how would they just happen to meet? Could there be a hint of how these two lives randomly collide? More action in the logline? Does she come running out of the woods looking for help? Being chased? Pounds on his door? Then, give more of a clear reason for them to join forces. What are the stakes? Is it money? Survival? And watch out for redundancies within a sentence: fleeing, flee, etc. Try not to repeat words. Also, the logline probably could be shortened. There are lots of adjectives, perhaps cut some to be more concise and succinct. Hope that helps!