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ELEVATOR PITCH

ELEVATOR PITCH
By Rutger Oosterhoff

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A moral, but romantically conflicted young man is confronted by a deity whose offer for  conflict resolution is more tempting than temptation itself.

SYNOPSIS:

In festivals now. For more info see: www.elevatorpitchthemovie.com

Aray Brown

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Rutger Oosterhoff

Thanks for the rating Aray.

Russell C Goeins III

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Russell C Goeins III

Intriguing. Definitely makes me want to find out more! How are things going on the festival circuit?

Rutger Oosterhoff

Tanks Russel, in fact the logline is more like a good tagline, so your rating is spot on (maybe a bit high). The festival circuit is ok, not great. But for me the most important thing is that people are going to see the short film. I guess that's why we make them?! Next screening at Sunscreen West Film Festival, saterday okt 7. Waiting to see if we qualify for "Arizona Short" and a bunch of other festivals to come.

Donald Dominguez

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Donald Dominguez

This is a good pitch Rutger.

John Michael German

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