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P.H.A.T. PAY DAY

P.H.A.T. PAY DAY
By J Anthony Ramos

GENRE: Comedy, Thriller
LOGLINE:

In desperate need of money to pay for his mom's medical procedure, Marty and two, ever arguing friends, agree to kidnap the unfaithful mobster husband of a scorned wife, but their plan falls through when his mysterious lover murders him the night of, causing them to run for their lives from hit men, all while trying to uncover the identity of the murderous mistress.

Chaun Lee

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Chaun Lee

Lololol...I could see this entire movie with your logline! Love it!

J Anthony Ramos

Thank you Chantel Lee. So weird, just last night I sent to email query letters out to a literary manager and a producer respectively. Essentially, the first time I've done this, so you commenting on this is a good sign. Maybe it is its time. Keep your fingers crossed, and thank you again for reading the log line and your comment. Take care.

Nathaniel Baker

LOVE IT!!!!!!

Nathaniel Baker

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J Anthony Ramos

Thank you Nathaniel Baker.

Don Collins

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