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Gail, a strung out,
young prostitute, awakens to the possibility of leaving the streets and
becoming a singer, but first, she must break away
from her poisonous pimp.
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I like this one much better J but going to suggest again -' A young prostitute battles her poisonous pimp to fulfill her dream of becoming a famous singer.'
Love it Timothy, I had been messing with this one for a while. Thank you. I've also been having a problem that this script is now at 29 pages (started at 20 pages in the 1st draft and is now in its 5th draft), so it's been a challenge to keep it as a short script, but I wrote what is necessary to tell this story. There is a Director/Producer that wants to shoot it next year. Thanks again for your feedback and suggestion(s).
My pleasure J. Good luck