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By J Anthony Ramos

GENRE: Horror, Drama

Barbara, a sad stoic middle aged woman, visits a Tarot Reader to ask about a possible job promotion in her future. In reality, she's seeking to understand both a painful recent loss, and a now very present inner fury.

Timothy Christopher Teemal

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Timothy Christopher Teemal

I feel like I want more from this logline. As though it's missing something. Suggestion - "A dark secret is revealed to Barbara after she visits a Tarot reader, forcing her to........................................

J Anthony Ramos

Thank you Timothy. In the story, Barbara has suffered a recent emotional loss, something she does not reveal to the Tarot Reader (or is revealed to the reader/viewer) until late in the script, setting up a surprise for the Tarot Reader who in turn, reveals a surprise to Barbara. I will definitely keep working on this logline.

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