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A DARK DAY IN LEAF
By Ryan Andrew Brandt
When a ruthless gang of Elves terrorize the small town of Leaf, a diverse group of bounty hunters (Elves, a Dwarf, a Fairy and a Orc) come to town, all aiming to pick up the score.
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Your welcome Ryan Andrews Brandt. I use this method Binge Worthy, High Concept, Relatable Characters and Grammar. Your issue was grammar related. Rewrite it using Subject + Verb + Adj/Adv etc.
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