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Britt MacMasters, a U.S. Marshal who rarely brings them back alive, returns home from the trail to discover his 12-year-old son has been kidnapped by outlaws.
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Starring Jay Pickett, Peter Facinelli, Tom Skerritt, Gattlin Griffith, Mason McNulty, Cody Jones, Callder Griffith, Vernon Walker, Ardeshir Radpour, Rick Moffatt, Kevin McNiven, Peter Sherayko.
Released Sept. 10, 2021 from Lionsgate.
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Aided by an Indian Scout and a Town Deputy, a US Marshall races to save his kidnapped son from a murderous outlaw gang who hightails into hostile [Indian] territory. (29)
A US Marshall, aided by an Indian Scout and a Town Deputy, ride into hostile [Indian] territory.to save [rescue] his kidnapped son from a murderous outlaw gang. (27)
When a murderous outlaw gang kidnaps his son and hightails into hostile [Indian] territory, a US Marshall enlists an Indian Scout and Town Deputy for a perilous chase to save him. (30)
The assumption is the territory harbors hostile Indians.
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Tony! Thanks so much! I always struggle with loglines.
NP, Jerry. Yippie ki yay!.
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Love It!!!!!!!!!!
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What is your suggestion to improve the logline, John?
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I love it... Your Synopsis has a lot of energy too.
Thanks, Arthur!
Screenplay has been optioned!
It was filmed in Aug-Sept in Buffalo WY starring Tom Skerritt, Peter Facinelli, Jay Pickett, directed by Michael Feifer. Should be out in 2021.
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Interesting. Good logline.