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When a horrific military insurgency conquers the emperor of Ethiopia, two strong yet diffident teenagers must escape alone to avoid demise.
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Good logline, but I can't help but feel the second half almost kills it. Leave it to the reader to figure it out. Remember to give the gist of the story, it's so much easier on you and the audience.