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ON A ROAD LESS TRAVELED
By James Welday
In 1942, a melancholic teen pianist, haunted by her family’s malicious past, escapes to her estranged Aunt and Uncle’s secluded inn. Upon arrival, a sinister presence begins to plague her every move.
ON A ROAD LESS TRAVELED
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Nice, but could be condensed down. A touch wordy.
Lascelles Hemmings Agreed. I'll put some further work into it.
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I agree that it is a little word. I would probably write something like “During the height of World War II a troubled teen moves into a haunted inn deep in the Sierra Nevada Mountains.”
Dan Guardino noted. Thank you, appreciate it.
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AN interesting premise. Any reason why it's set in the 40s?
Hi Robert, I've long been fascinated with both period horror films and World War II itself.
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Sarah Katz thank you! The setting comes from a road trip I made some years ago, and always felt it would make a great location for a ghost story.
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