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CATERPILLAR GIRL
By Goran Zivanovic
A sadistic coming-of-age ritual in a remote European village gains the attention of a female Hollywood Screenwriter in the 1960s, who uses a young bride's experience to write a provocative tale of gender inequality, and exposes some parallel film industry truths.
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This is a pretty good logline Goran. (although I'll have to google 'hedonistic') Maybe simplify the end part. Protagonist + their goal + antagonistic force = a good logline.
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Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated :)
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