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THE END OF HEARTACHE

THE END OF HEARTACHE
By Marty Chartrand

GENRE: Drama
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A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting in hopes to ease the pain of losing his wife.

THE END OF HEARTACHE

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Sean Jefferson

Very nicely done! A beautiful and honest effort on a very real and delicate scenario.

Sean Jefferson

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Rob Dunphy

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Johann Evrard

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Rutger Oosterhoff

What's the story?

Rutger Oosterhoff

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Alejandrino Martinez

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Steve Harrison

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Teresa Barber

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William Gunn

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William Gunn

Great Story...Lots of Pathos without being too heavy-handed. Believable protagonist. You can almost feel his pain!

Zheng Lin

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Terrance Pruitt

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Martine de Jong

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Rutger Oosterhoff

Good screenplay, maybe cut the last line. For the logline, maybe something like this but better: "A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting, hoping to ease the pain of losing his wife. Fast becoming his own worst enemy, he must look for psychological help or lose his young daughter too."

Nathaniel Baker

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Susan Harris

OMG was getting caught up in the story, very emotional.

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