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A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting in hopes to ease the pain of losing his wife.
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Very nicely done! A beautiful and honest effort on a very real and delicate scenario.
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Great Story...Lots of Pathos without being too heavy-handed. Believable protagonist. You can almost feel his pain!
Good screenplay, maybe cut the last line. For the logline, maybe something like this but better: "A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting, hoping to ease the pain of losing his wife. Fast becoming his own worst enemy, he must look for psychological help or lose his young daughter too."
OMG was getting caught up in the story, very emotional.