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THE SCOOTER - SHORT
By Rick Hardin
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A reluctant Mickey is forced to spend the day with his Grandpa who wants to spend the day building a scooter from wood. At first Mickey is bored but slowly becomes intrigued with the project, then excited. This ultra-short 2 page script packs a lot into its small package. This script is available free to right person.
THE SCOOTER - SHORT
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I like this too and I can get your visualizations I just tend to wonder if some might find it complicated such as a shaving of wood to make the next shaving smaller. I like the concept but why and what for? Of course in a just a couple of pages it is hard to get full intent. But yet is as an old polished screenwriter is switching places with a kid in the world of screenwriting. LOL!
HI Mitchell, I'm glad you liked it! I took a local screenwriting course and although it was too basic for me I had fun and I did learn a couple of things. One of our assignments was to write a "one minute" movie, a short script 1-2 pages only. It was a challenge since I normally think in feature length films. I've been a wood worker for more then 20years and with the right plane sharpened well I think it wouldn't be too hard. Thanks again!