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AMARIS

AMARIS
By Ian White

GENRE: Sci-fi
LOGLINE:

Earth has been decimated by climate change. When a cynical environmental scientist and the crew of the International Space Station make contact with a lush and resourceful alien planet, Earth’s warring nations race to stake a claim.

SYNOPSIS:

Sending a message out into space can be a dangerous thing. You never know who is listening. Some wonder, even fear, that one day the signals we send out into space might be discovered by some malevolent species. But, what if we were the ones to receive a signal, and what if we were the malevolent species?

AMARIS

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Chad Stroman

Hi Ian. I can read your logline and synopsis but your screenplay isn't available for download. Also just a quick recommendation. You may want to fix the spelling of "planet" in your logline.

Ian White

Oh, thanks for catching that! Can you view the play now?

Chad Stroman

Yes. I can download it now.

Ian White

Great.

Thomas Thorpe

I loved the energy, but way too much dialogue. You should show the development, not tell it through talking heads.

Noah Parker

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Paul Owens

Fantastic log line. What a great idea.

Paul Owens

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