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CALAN GAEAF EXCERPT
By Cole J. Davis

GENRE: Historical, Sci-fi
LOGLINE: History is a thread connecting events together.

SYNOPSIS:

Ifan's temporal system malfunctions due to a concussion. "Calan Gaeaf excerpt" http://www.wattpad.com/18252644-calan-gaeaf-excerpt

CALAN GAEAF EXCERPT

SC1. EXT. TEMPLE OF NEITH - DAY - SAIS - 590 B.C.E. [OVER THE ENTRANCE TO THE TEMPLE IS A CARVED STONE RELIEF OF THE GODDESS NEITH. THE CARVING BEARS A STRIKING SIMILARITY TO EVELYN WAUGH. NEARBY, TEMPLE ATTENDANTS MAKE PREPARATIONS FOR THE FESTIVAL OF THOTH. SOLON, ATHENIAN LAWMAKER, FORMER ITERATION OF IFAN FENCIS; HEADS TOWARDS THE ENTRANCE.] CUT TO: - SC2. INT. STORE ROOM - NATIONAL MUSEUM CARDIFF - NIGHT - 2014 [IFAN FENCIS IS LAIN PRONE ON THE FLOOR. IFAN’S EYES FLUTTER OPEN. IFAN GROANS. IFAN GETS TO HIS FEET. IFAN RUBS HIS HEAD, UNSTEADILY WALKING TOWARDS THE SHELF WHERE THE BOX USED TO BE. IFAN REACHES DOWN TO RETRIEVE HIS E- READER FROM BENEATH THE SHELF. IFAN TAPS IN A SERIES OF SPACE-TIME COORDINATES. IFAN DISAPPEARS FROM THE ROOM.] CUT TO: - SC3. EXT. RHEIC TIDAL FLAT - AVALONIA - DAY - CAMBRIAN ERA [WE’RE ON THE SHORES OF THE RHEIC OCEAN. THE SEA IS SHALLOW. MANY SPECIES OF TRILOBITES AND MOLLUSCS CAN BE SEEN IN THE WATER. ON THE BEACH ARE MICROBIAL MATS AND CRYPTOBIOTIC SOIL. IFAN APPEARS NEAR THE WATER. IFAN STUMBLES AS A SAND MOLLUSC CRAWLS OVER HIS SHOE. IFAN PEERS AT HIS E-READER. THE TEMPORAL APP. LISTS- 5080.11. 1.13.0 YALE TOWN. IFAN BENDS DOWN TOWARDS THE WATER. IFAN WATCHES A CLUTCH OF BLACK TRILOBITES GOBBLE PLANKTON JUST BELOW THE WATER LINE. IFAN TURNS AWAY FROM THE WATER. IFAN WANDERS UP THE DRY BEACH.] IFAN FENCIS “Trilobites in the water, cryptobiotic soil on the beach. How does that translate to fifty eighty common era? What, is there a virus in the APP.? God, are you listening? This really sucks.” [IFAN CONTINUES WALKING FURTHER INLAND.] CUT TO: - SC4. INT. TEMPLE OF NEITH - DAY - SAIS - 590 B.C.E. [ELDERLY PRIEST SONCHIS IS STOOD BEFORE A STONE BENCH. SEVERAL PAPYRI SCROLLS ARE LAID OUT ON THE BENCH. SOLON IS SAT ON A CUSHION ON THE FLOOR. SOLON IS WRITING 6TH CENTURY B.C.E. GREEK ONTO A PAPYRI SCROLL. FINISHING A LINE OF GREEK WRITING ON THE SCROLL, SOLON LOOKS UP AT SONCHIS. SONCHIS IS SILENT FOR A BEAT.] SONCHIS “I see you running through the river bed of history. You played with the Gods; those who would erase the world we’ve always known, will always know. You played with the architects of creation, they know you well. You are loved.” CUT TO: - SC5. EXT. RHEIC TIDAL FLAT - AVALONIA - DAY - CAMBRIAN ERA [IFAN LOOKS AT HIS E-READER. IFAN OPENS HIS MESSENGER APP. IFAN SETS HIS ACCOUNT SIGNAL TO ’SEND TO ALL CONTACTS.’ IFAN TYPES- ‘TEMPORAL APP MALFUNCTIONING. MANUAL EXTRACTION NEEDED.’ IFAN PRESSES ‘SEND.’ IFAN CONTINUES WALKING.] CUT TO: -

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