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REVISED DREAM WORLD OPENING
By Cole J. Davis

GENRE: Action, Crime, Sci-fi
LOGLINE: The shadow hides in plain sight.

SYNOPSIS:

In 1936, Cole and Cecil explore a mystery in New Delhi. In 5080 Vancouver, the Black Brigade frame Ifan for sabotage of an interstellar cruiser. "Revised Dream World opening" http://www.wattpad.com/24093733-revised-dream-world-opening

REVISED DREAM WORLD OPENING

SC1. EXT. RESTAURANT PATIO - DAY - NEW DELHI - 1936 [CECIL SMITH IS SAT AT A TABLE. COLE JACOB BILLINGTON.IS SAT ACROSS FROM HIM. A THIRD MAN, RUPESH DISWAMI IS SAT BETWEEN THEM. AGE 42, RUPESH IS THE HEAD OF SECURITY FOR THE NEW DELHI VORTEX EXPLORATION GROUP. TWO MEN EXIT THE RESTAURANT CARRYING PLATES OF FOOD. THE FIRST IS SIR ALFRED WALLACE WITH THE SHROPSHIRE PATROL. ALFRED PLACES HIS PLATE ONTO A NEARBY TABLE. THE SECOND MAN IS ROBERT EDWARDS WITH THE MELBOURNE BRANCH OF THE CPB. ROBERT PLACES HIS PLATE NEXT TO ALFRED’S. RUPESH INDICATES COLE AND CECIL.] RUPESH DISWAMI “Gentlemen, we appear to be ready to begin. Cole, meet Sir Alfred Wallace and Robert Edwards. Gentlemen, meet Captain Billington and Cecil Smith out of Vancouver. Robert hails from Melbourne and Alfred is the empire’s man.” COLE JACOB BILLINGTON “Good to meet you. Nice place we’ve got here.” SIR ALFRED WALLACE “We’ve caught the tail of a dragon, this mysterious outpost in the Burmese jungle.” CECIL SMITH “How did you spot the facility? The file describes the outpost as ‘appearing to create an atomic sink in the material landscape, as though the facility has ceased to exist, looping its borders into a pocket realm.” SIR ALFRED WALLACE “And that’s what brought the facility to our notice. Its very non- existence only served to clarify its existence all the more.” COLE JACOB BILLINGTON “Ah, life’s eternal conundrum. Should we go?” CECIL SMITH “We should go.” CUT TO: - SC2. INT. ADJ. CORRIDOR - INCUBI CRUISER - NIGHT - 5080 [A SECTION OF WALL PANELLING HAS BEEN REMOVED, REVEALING CLEAR BUBBLE WRAP MATERIAL - INTERSTELLAR RADIATION INSULATION. TWO HANDS COVERED BY BLACK LEATHER GLOVES ATTACH A BLACK CUBE TO THE INSULATION WITH ADHESIVE. PATRICK, A FALLEN GOD BOMBER TAKES A STEP BACK. WE SEE PATRICK FROM THE CHEST DOWN - THE FORM OF COLE. PATRICK CLOSES THE WALL PANELLING. PATRICK TURNS TOWARDS A SECURITY CAMERA ABOVE THE ENTRANCE. PATRICK‘S FACE IS THAT OF IFAN FENCIS. PATRICK DISAPPEARS.] CUT TO: - SC3. EXT. BURRARD INLET - SUNRISE - 5080 [AN INCUBI CRUISER HEADS OUT OF THE ATMOSHERE OVER THE INLET. BELOW, WE SEE THE WATER FRONT STATION SPACE PORT. PATRICK, SEEN FROM THE BACK, WATCHES THE SHIP CLIMB FROM THE PARKING LOT. A SECURITY CAMERA IS ATTACHED TO THE WALL OF THE BUILDING. THE CRUISER EXPLODES INTO WHITE LIGHT, SPREADING OUT LIKE A SUPERNOVA. SHRAPNEL PLUNGES INTO THE WATER. MORE SHRAPNEL SHOOTS IN ALL DIRECTIONS. SHARDS HIT THE GROUND IN STANLEY PARK. - HISTORIC GAS TOWN - - THE EAST END. SIRENS BLARE. EMERGENCY VEHICLES CONVERGE ON THE AREA SURROUNDING THE SPACE PORT. PATRICK WALKS TOWARDS THE SECURITY CAMERA.] CUT TO: - SC4. INT. SECURITY CENTRE - SPACE PORT - DAY - 5080 [A MAN IS SAT BEHIND A ROW OF HOLO-FEEDS. THE MAN WATCHES PATRICK’S FACE ON CLOSE UP AS PATRICK SPEAKS DIRECTLY INTO THE SECURITY CAMERA.] PATRICK “That was me, that explosion. Names’ Ifan Fencis and I’m a very bad man. Now come and get me.” [PATRICK TURNS AND WALKS AWAY FROM THE CAMERA. THE MAN JUMPS OUT OF HIS SEAT.] CUT TO: - SC5. EXT. WATERFRONT SPACE PORT - DAY - 5080 [PATRICK WHISTLES A CREEPY MELODY, WATCHING THE SIDE ENTRANCE OF THE BUILDING. THE DOORS BURST OPEN, REVEALING THE MAN FROM THE SECURITY CENTRE. PATRICK DISAPPEARS. THE MAN STOPS ON THE SPOT. A SECURITY GUARD, FOLLOWING RIGHT BEHIND, BUMPS INTO THE MAN.] CUT TO: -

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