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A lost trailer for the Fifties’ Sci Fi classic, there’s shock, horror and terror when a scientist who creates a machine to aid humanity tests it on himself... with disastrous results.
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COMING SOON TO A THEATER NEAR YOU!
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OMG! This is Great.. I Love Grindhouse Flicks!
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Thanks, William. Thank you all.
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Catchy logline.
A funny trailer. Captures the essence of '50s trailers.
Still love it. Where can I get a copy????
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I don't understand the beginning of this logline, is this based on a trailer, or is the trailer part of the story? I would lose it and no ellipsis in logline. Try just using "There’s shock, horror and terror when a scientist creates a machine to aid humanity tests it on himself with disastrous results."
Thanks. I forgot the no ellipsis in logline rule.