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Four Youtubers spend one night in a haunted house as a challenge, only to find out that they are unwelcome by the spirits.
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This logline is simple and clear. My main concern, though, is that it sounds far too familiar. There are so many horror stories that have already been produced that could have a very similar logline. And so I would urge you to use this logline to demonstrate your story's USP, its point of difference. Try and communicate how it's a fresh take on this well-worn sub-genre.
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