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PUBLIC ENEMY *PROOF OF CONCEPT*

PUBLIC ENEMY *PROOF OF CONCEPT*
By Jessie Navarro-Parks

GENRE: Crime, Drama
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In a time where lawlessness runs rampant, a young and ambitious gang leader, disillusioned with playing by society’s rules to get out of the hood life in Compton, CA, struggles to find himself as he juggles his criminal lifestyle and his no-holds-barred pursuit of freedom, all while under the crosshairs of the LAPD.

PUBLIC ENEMY *PROOF OF CONCEPT*

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Johnathan Clayborn

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Johnathan Clayborn

It's decent. I feel like it could be condensed a little bit to make it more clear without losing any of the meaning. Maybe something like this?

A young and ambitious gang leader, disillusioned with playing by society’s rules, struggles to get out of the lawless hood life of Compton, CA. He juggles his criminal lifestyle and his no-holds-barred pursuit of freedom, all while under the crosshairs of the LAPD.

Jessie Navarro-Parks

Yoooooooo. I think you done did something there. Lol appreciate the feedback! Thanks a bunch man!

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