THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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YOU WEREN'T SUPPOSED TO BE PERFECT
By Amber Brown
A felon involved in a sophisticated fencing operation to fund a life-saving medical procedure pretends to be a recent Harvard Law graduate to impress a beautiful young heiress way out of his league. Just when he’s got her hooked, his past forces him to make hard decisions.
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Liking the logline but I was hoping for more. Something at the end that threatens his goal. "...But just when he snags her and vows to change his ways, his old past forces him to make hard decisions." Just a suggestion. No offence.
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Timothy Christopher Teemal Thank you! You make a great point.
most welcome Amber