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FAITH WALKS
By Torey Hill
After discovering she is adopted, a young woman's search for her birth parents leads to a time travelling peek into what her life would have been.
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Faith is a young woman with the wind at her back and the world at her fingertips. In her senior year of college she discovers she is adopted. The loving parents who had raised her for 22 years immediately became strangers and she knew it was time to seek her real parents. Her journey leads to time travel, self-discovery, and choices she never imagined she'd have to make.
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I like the premise but I'm not really feeling the logline or the synopsis. May i suggest - 'After discovering she is adopted, a woman's search for her birth parents leads to a time travelling peek into what her life would have been.' I am seeing this as a kind of Adoption Scrooged so her life wouldn't be perfect and over the course of her journey into a possible pass and future she would learn to love her life and become a better person. Just my 2 cents.
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I absolutely love that you get the premise!! And I totally dig your 2 cents!! Much appreciated!!
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I am new on here so I am not sure how this works but I would love to use that logline. Or at least the essence of it.
Feel free to use it. It's totally yours.
Most welcome.
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Thanks!