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INTRAPLAY
By Rob Dunphy

GENRE: Thriller
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A sadistic psychologist condemns patients to death as her detective husband must solve the series of puzzling homicides. In the vein of The Intruder. (118 pp)

SYNOPSIS:

Final Draft. Looking for feedback.

Aray Brown

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Barry A.A. Dillinger

Love to read this one at your convenience!

Barry A.A. Dillinger

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Roxanne Paukner

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Nathaniel Baker

LOVE IT!!!!!!

Nathaniel Baker

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Shahriar Bourbour

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Barry A.A. Dillinger

Just finished reading it! Very nice dialogue throughout! Sweet job on the cut-backs to the different murders and their consequences. Nice ending. Didn't see the whole Jason connection coming in the beginning. Excellent transition to him being (SPOILER ALERT) the "helper." Also, wanted to give a fun shout-out to "fruit dispute!" Great job!

Rob Dunphy

Thanks Barry! I appreciate the positive feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. If you think of any areas to critique, please, please, send it my way too.

Laila Turner-Gaye Aka The Queen Of English

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Rob Dunphy

Thanks Laila. Much appreciated.

Anthony Salvatore Garrone

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Brian Elias

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Christopher Joseph

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Rob Dunphy

Thank you for the reviews Anthony, Brian, Kay and Christopher. Very much appreciated!

Rob Dunphy

Thank you, Lance!

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