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A sadistic psychologist condemns patients to
death as her detective husband must solve the series of puzzling homicides. In the vein of The Intruder. (118 pp)
Final Draft. Looking for feedback.
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Just finished reading it! Very nice dialogue throughout! Sweet job on the cut-backs to the different murders and their consequences. Nice ending. Didn't see the whole Jason connection coming in the beginning. Excellent transition to him being (SPOILER ALERT) the "helper." Also, wanted to give a fun shout-out to "fruit dispute!" Great job!
Thanks Barry! I appreciate the positive feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. If you think of any areas to critique, please, please, send it my way too.
Thanks Laila. Much appreciated.
Thank you for the reviews Anthony, Brian, Kay and Christopher. Very much appreciated!
Thank you, Lance!