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LOOKING GLASS

LOOKING GLASS
By Joseph Deegan

GENRE: Sci-fi, Drama
LOGLINE:

A limited television series. Set in southeast Nevada near Area 51, a struggling underrepresented class of people are dying in a desolate desert locale due to the past criminal actions of an evil U.S. Air Force General. These poor folks are led and cared for by a brilliant female African American doctor who is assisted by her biracial son and committed partner. The outlook for their bleak community is radically changed when an extraterrestrial escapes the General’s imprisonment at a secret air force facility and materializes at their encampment with a secret that will change their lives forever.

LOOKING GLASS

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Nathaniel Baker

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Phillip "Le Raconteur" Hardy

Your logline is more like a synopsis. Try to edit it down to one high concept sentence. You don't need so much detail. You have all that you need with part of your synopsis:

The dire outlook for an impoverished community suffering a high mortality rate is radically improved when an extraterrestrial takes refuge with them after it escapes a secret base near Area 51

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Tony S.

An extraterrestrial who escapes Area 51 changes the lives of an impoverished community after taking refuge with them and sharing secrets that radically lowers their high mortality rate.

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