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A tough guy falls for a woman who steals a bag of money from the wrong people. Now they’re both on the run. But as half the town is chasing the bag of money she stole, he's chasing a girl.
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Fun, compelling, charming idea - but that Logline really needs work. It's written like a tagline for the poster. It shouldn't be divided up into three sentences all as is; it needs to be summarized in one reading.
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