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PLOTHOLE (USA)
By Egi David Perdana II

GENRE: Mystery, Thriller
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The story of a man who tried to unravel the mystery of his brother's suicide, after he refused his brother's request to divorce his wife, for the sake of being married off to a Polish nobleman.


SYNOPSIS:

I hope the movie in black and white format with uncommon aspect ratio.

In every game there must be a hole that gaping we just need to pay attention to details only because the hole that looks very small turned out to be very large

The night before the new year Bernitt Irwin sent a letter to his brother in Poland, the contents of which he wanted his brother's wife to be divorced and handed over to one of the nobles in a remote area in northern Poland, the aim was a pretext to trap some rebels who wanted to kill several families nobleman who is a member of congress, Bernitt explained that it was done to make the rebels who have known their identities but they are not aware of it mingled in a public party and they will be arrested at that place too. But obviously Stefan flatly refused his brother's request, he thought it was just an excuse for his brother so that he could have Arda Olic, Stefan wife, he instead sent a letter of rejection with all forms of verbal abuse and baseless accusations.

A few months later there was news that Irwin had committed suicide and in the newspaper it was reported the killing of several members of the congress who had a close kinship, Stefan was devastated, from Poland he immediately rushed to the United States, not only to attend his brother's funeral but to search deeper why his brother in the USA could find out the complicated problems that occurred in Poland and why should Arda be the wife of a Polish nobleman. That question continued to haunt Stefan's head even when the congressman murder case and his brother's death were long forgotten by people.

Stefan's initial investigation began with what congress was followed by the victims who were killed, unexpectedly the congress was a congress gathering of every European head of state represented by four people but the four people must be close to the leader of the country but not allowed siblings or blood ties. , and the northern Polish aristocrat was close to the Polish president and the nobleman sent 2 cousins, 1 uncle and 1 child, but after hearing the testimony of witnesses who were either false or not, the nobleman deliberately trapped the four families and cooperated with the rebels, who even stranger was not the nobleman who was going to get married but his son who was strangely sent to the congress, the nobleman was willing to accept the conditions of his son's wife which he sent so that the child was married to Arda, who turned out to be his former college friend, but Stefan was still very confused why inside the brother's letter instead said trinkets The defense was to trap the rebels while the rebels actually cooperated with the nobleman.

Stefan began investigating the rebels and it turned out that the rebels referred to by his brother had long since come out and were considered traitors by his group, in fact the names of the rebels were very close to the aristocrat even one of the rebels according to his confession when questioned by Stefan in prison considered themselves martyred and willing to be considered a villain just as an impression that the rebels are arbitrary and the world will assume that they are the party that is always to blame, Stefan still wonders why his brother could have something to do with the problem, he wondered why once Arda was the boy's college friend of the noble, he recalled his first meeting with Arda, how his older brother preferred to settle in America until finally Stefan found a fact that was beyond his familiar limits relating to fear that could never be forgotten.

Trivia:

The nobleman is Bernitt, Bernitt is a psychopath who deliberately designed games for his younger brother, the intention of cousins, uncles and children is actually the levels in the class of a group of devil worshipers in Poland that are driven by a judge in the United States, some members spread in several countries Europe and America.

Stefan never saw his brother buried directly.

The four members of the congress were killed as sacrifices, surrender of bodies or voluntary bodies and they did give up their lives but were manipulated as if it were murder.

Members of congress are ritual victims too, but their sacrifice is called sacrifice one level above the sacrifice of other families, that is sacrifice where they are ready to die but are also prepared to bear the shame and scorn around the world.

The leaders of European countries are members of the devil worship community on the same level as Bernitt, in the devil worship community there are written rules that anyone in the same level must work hand in hand and want to fulfill the requests of other members of the same level, with conditions that ask please have the favor to be avenged by members of that same level.

all rituals are intended to arouse anti-christ.

ending:

Stefan who knew his brother's death was fake and already knew everything came to his brother because he heard the news that his brother had actually killed himself, he also saw his brother immediately hanging, annoyed and unsure that his brother was really dead Stefan also shot his brother's heart many times, sure enough the brother who was actually pretending to die vomited blood and finally actually died.

A few moments later Stefan came out of the room with no fear at all and suddenly one of the policemen approached him, not to arrest Stefan but to give a letter written by his brother's hand, specifically for Stefan, said the policeman, the brother advised that after his fake death he will surrender all treasures to Stefan and go settle in South Africa.

Stefan also read the letter and the camera highlighted the writing where the older brother was intentionally directing the younger brother to kill him for the victory ritual of sin and the birth of an anti-christ spirit, Stefan was disappointed, he complained (said the word "No"), cried then sat limp and came the terrible laugh of his brother repeatedly, Stefan squeezed the letter, holding his head and saying "No! No! No!" like a mad man. and as viewers, we are presented with a scene where the dependent brother laughs at Stefan, a mixture occurs between the brother who dies stiffly hanging and the brother who laughs while hanging and also all those whose faces suddenly turn into Stefan's brother's face and laugh at Stefan combined with the faces of people who felt confused so Stefan grew depressed.

Stefan's voice continued to sound until the scene slowly moved outside, where there were many crows that roamed and flew, an owl that kept staring at the scene of the crime, a black cat that the audience could see was staring out of the employer's apartment window, and behind it we can see a very sinister ghost standing, an old clock that shows exactly 6 pm past 6 minutes and 6 seconds, and the sun is covered by black clouds and after that the song Venus in Furs starts playing as the final sign of the film .

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PLOTHOLE (USA)

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I know it's a mystery but it sounds too complicated

John Theroux

127 read this but no one commented? OK, the title is vague, suicide is not really a mystery and a $30M budget will not help your cause.

Egi David Perdana II

127 views because I share PlotHole on Facebook.

30+ million dollars because that is the highest limit for the budget on stage32, if there is anything higher than that, of course I will choose it.

This is not about the death of a character, this is about the reason after Stefan refused his brother's request, his brother committed suicide, killing himself just because the request was rejected doesn't make sense, that's why Stefan is investigating. And the mystery is also about the people around Stefan and his brother, not just suicide.

Title? Because there are actually many gap points like Plothole from the people around Stefan, they are not perfect, because no creature is perfect, and Stefan realized that until he came to the final conclusion that you can read that his brother faked it, for the letter Stefan read-in In the end I just wanted to give it a twist, but like Roby's dialogue on Stefan (in the script) where he says he's going to have kids this year, that's just a little plothole of one of the characters around Stefan.

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