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A single mother takes a job as a house keeper and when she least expects it, love happens.
SYNOPSIS:
Lisa, single mother to Grace, gets a job as a house keeper, with Tom, a man who is tending to both of his elderly parents. As she works she sees how gentle and patient Tom is with his parents. She's smitten, but not ready for a relationship. Grace is also scared of Tom and that won't work. Tom and Grace have a moment that takes Lisa off guard and what she wasn't ready for just happens.
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Hi Tim, when does she least expect it? I think that should be included in the logline as it sounds like that will be the hook that makes your story unique
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