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MANNEQUINS KNIVES OUT
By Fabrice J Katalay

GENRE: Thriller, Horror
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On Chrismas eve, A group of thieves break into a shopping mall under renovation and find themselves fighting against robotic mannequins.

Donnalyn Vojta

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Donnalyn Vojta

Hey, Fabrice. This is pretty good! You have a typo... "A" should be lower case. Besides that, one way to improve the logline is to mention the stakes. Are they fighting for their lives or just for the retail items? Good luck. This sounds like a movie I would watch!

Tasha Lewis

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