A young orphan girl with the hopes of finding a new family, bonds with a stuffed animal, which happens to have the ghost of a lost boy living inside it.
"A young orphan girl with the hopes of finding a new family bonds with a stuffed animal, which happens to have the ghost of a lost boy living inside it." would work better gramattically, the first comma is not necessary
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"A young orphan girl with the hopes of finding a new family bonds with a stuffed animal, which happens to have the ghost of a lost boy living inside it." would work better gramattically, the first comma is not necessary
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