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It shall corrupt its owner, even though he is the righteous of men. Upon reading its pages, his journey will begin, one of dependence for mortal flesh and blood.
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Hi Sean! Very cool but this isn't a logline, it's a tagline or maybe even a line of dialogue from your script. The logline needs to tell us what this story is about. Who's your protagonist? What do they want? What's standing in their way? What will they have to do?
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