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THE 4TH HOLE
By Rick Oldham
THE 4TH HOLE
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Is the golfer or the playful bear playing the hole of his life?
Does lack conflict, stakes etc. Not clear what the story is really about. Do give me a shout if you'd like some logline help. I've some info I could send you.
thanks. I've worked on it.
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